Feedback and changes;

We have been received and analysed some information which we collected from sending out some questionnaires; in this blog post I will be discussing what changes we have made due to this feedback and what we plan to do to our 2 minute clip to help fit to our audiences.

  The first change which we are going to make is to the costume which we was planning to use we originally didn’t think very much about what we was going to have our characters in during our 2 minute clip but when we got feedback we realised that it was a very important part of the overall appearance of the clip therefore we decided to discuss what we would put our characters; from this we decided that we would dress our characters in basic outfits with the main girl wearing a white hospital gown and the interviewer wearing a suit so they looks professional and well presented.

    We also noticed within the feedback that the plot was a very key part of the opening so we then went back to our plan and storyboard and added some different elements to it such as adding more dialogue so there is more for the audience to watch and they can get to know the characters better which will help to keep the audience locked into the opening and make them want to carry on with watching after our 2 minute clip.

   We found that the audience also expect thrillers to cause tension upon the audience so we have added in some extra pieces to make the audience feel tension more often the main thing we did was to get more tension was add more close up into the clip so that the audience can see the emotions which are being shown more often this will make them fear the character more as they have extreme emotions being shown such as fear and sacredness.

   The last change which we made from the feedback we got back is to add more variations of shots so that the clip adds more tension this is done by the high amount of changes and angles which are used in the clip.